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Let me sleep...
Let me sleep from now on...
So I can escape from the reality...
So I can escape from my sorrow..
So I can escape from those people...
Let me escape...
Let me escape...
Let me dream...
Of a life without sorrow...
Of a life without loneliness...
Of a life how it should be...
Let me dream...
Let me dream...
And wake me up when this nightmare is over...
And say everything is going to be ok.
:iconwaterwitchgirl:
A poem I wrote a few days ago.
It's how about I feel now for a couple of months...
No I'm not depressed! I just have my ups and downs...

When I typed this on the computer I changed a bit of my poem, but now I don't now what is the best. But I decided to upload my second (and much shorter) version.

Please comment!:thanks:
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~DuoD123 Jan 24, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
this'd make a great song!
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:iconatnarivik:
omg you write great poems! :)
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=paintedbluerose Jan 21, 2009  Student Writer
Oh, it's very nice! =D I like the feelings in it. Funny thing, it reminds me of something I wanted to write-only mine is a bit darker. :blush:
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:iconwaterwitchgirl:
mmm...maybe you should upload it...
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=paintedbluerose Jan 21, 2009  Student Writer
I'm thinking of it...
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:iconwaterwitchgirl:
You should do it! :nod:
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